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Paulette McCue
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Hi, my name is Paulette. I have finished a paranornal romance story. That fact in itself, makes me very happy. I do need an honest opinion from someone who wants the same. If this works for you, please let me know. Here is a short synopsis of my work:

A SciFi Romance at 105,072 words set in Las Vegas, “Shadow Detail: Savannah” follows Savannah Drake, who thinks she’s the average university student dealing with typical college life issues. When a complete stranger almost beats her to death after her shift at the mall, her entire reality morphs into an unrecognizable blur as she is forced to discover her true identity before it destroys her entire world. The coming-of-age story captures the protagonist’s struggle with her identity while touching on such universal concepts as love, depression and self-doubt, reality, guilt, and sacrifice.

While hospitalized following the brutal beating by this unknown attacker sent by Isabeau, the ultimate bad girl without a cause, Savannah’s family is forced to come clean about her true identity as an Amalgamate, a non-human supercreature with incredible fighting skills. It is discovered that Savannah has not been able to fuse, the Amalgamate equivalent to puberty, because of her use of antidepressants. With her sense of identity shattered, Savannah must fight to stay alive and gain control of her new powers. Together with Malik, the handsome guard assigned to protect her, Savannah learns to balance fighting for her life with the changes she is going through, losing loved ones and falling in love along the way.
 

Thanks for taking the time to read this.

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aminnick
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Joined: 2012-02-15
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Hi Paullete,

Your story sounds very interesting. I'd love to help out. I don't have a novel that needs critiquing, but I do write articles and stories on ocassion that I would love to have another set of eyes on. If you're still looking for an honest opinion send me an email at aminnick85@gmail.com

All the Best,

Andrew

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