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Seeking critique/beta readers for my YA Supernatural/Romance

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Sassie333
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Currently finishing the last chapter of my second edit. I am looking for help in regards to the following:

  1. Characters - portrayal and believability
  2. Dialogue - any areas where it loses momentum
  3. Plot and pacing - is it flowing on full steam, or running flat 
  4. Scenes and story - are they too long, repetitive, gripping, about right

I'd also love to know whether the story grabs you, ie, how does it make you feel.

Need good honest opinions where you might think it could be going wrong. But, I'm not against receiving the odd one or two 'loves' either. blush

I'm willing to return the favour but only a chapter at a time, as I'm also working on other projects as well (MS only as I can't edit PDF files, sorry).

Look forward to hearing from you.

 

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I would like to help you out!

I would like to help you out! Chapter by chapter is perfect for me! I also have several projects going at once. I prefer Word due to being acustomed to it's editing tools. :D You can email me if you like at sslafantasie@gmail.com

Thanks!

Sam

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Still looking for beta reader?

I would love the chance to help another writer out! I have a degree in Journalism, so I'm stronger in editing for grammar, punctuation, dialogue and scene - but I also have experience with other online critique groups for character and plot development.

Please email me at authorlynnhuffman@gmail.com or PM me here if you are still looking for help. 

 

Lynn

asgwilli
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If you still need help..

I would like to help you out and would probably take you up on returning the favor. If you're still interested you can contact me an email asgwilli@gmail.com.

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